Eoin Burgess as Liv
Character Description
A sarcastic, sharp-witted high schooler with a dry sense of humor, who masks her vulnerability with offbeat quips and a tough exterior. Beneath her quirky demeanor lies a keen observer of life grappling with the absurdity of her death.
Scene Description
A high school girl reflects on her bizarre and untimely death in an Arby's parking lot, choking on a Beef N' Cheddar.
Written by Jason Walter Vaile
Rachael Brown
ActressI am looking forward to seeing more of you, I say that because I think you've got real talent.
I did notice you tripped over a few words, but it's a long monologue and you can't restart over a little mispronounciation here or there.
Your acting was authentic. I loved the whispering and fluctuations in your voice. The physical acting (to seamlessly eat/drink) during this scene was very well done. You made some great choices and overall, you did a nice job building the character. Brava!
Bethynie Cooper
ActressHi Eoin, you have a great down-to earth vibe! You also used your prop really well and had awesome memorization, One suggestion I have is to let each line land a little more before moving onto the next one. I'd love to see each thought originating in your eyes before the line is said. One place you did this really well was when you said the man's comment about your weight "still hurt." More moments like that throughout would be amazing. Great job overall!
Becky Bartlett
ActressGood job, Eoin! I enjoyed your delivery! One minor suggestion would be to hide any name brands in your framing. For example, logos on clothing and in this case, "Canes" on the cup. I know the script uses name brands, but for the visual part, I would simply cover the name with my hand or turn the cup around, so the name isn't showing. Just a minor suggestion. Keep up the good work, Eoin!
