Weiwyn Badal as Caroline
Character Description
Caroline is a down-to-earth woman. While she's hopeful to find love, she just can't make it work with a clueless idiot. Her curvy frame is the topic of conversation. She's not typically self-conscious about it, but she's not interested in having it be the topic of conversation either.
Scene Description
Caroline has been set up on a blind date with Enrique. Caroline goes on the date to make her ex jealous, but Enrique is such a clueless fool that she just can't stick around and make it work.
Written by Jaclyn Whitt
Rebekah Cook
ActressThe lens loves you....I could follow the whole train of thought going on in your eyes! The reader was difficult to hear, but it helped to have something there to give you to the timing, at least, even if I could only barely tell there was audio you were responding to. Also, remember it's okay to trim off the end of the clip where you stop the recording, that way we are left thinking of your character in the scene, not seeing the break with character after. The overall pacing was nice.
Mark Miertschin
ActorGood job! Here are some notes. In the beginning, the character is eating. I understand eating on camera can be difficult. This kind of springboards the dialog. Even miming taking a bite with a couple of chews will help. Your readers volume is really low. Try to edit off the end when you reach to turn off the camera.
Dale Norman Green
Actor | WriterHey Weiwyn, good job on-the scene. You really looked embarrassed and humiliated.
Remember to keep the background simple - no doors or doorways. Plain background, even a blank wall. Good scene!
