Bryan Whorton as Ian
Character Description
Soft-spoken, easygoing, and kind, Ian is a polite and hardworking journalist who usually doesn't mind when his coworker Leslie orders him around. No one would guess that he's not just the mild-mannered, gentle man everyone thinks he is. But underneath his unassuming exterior, Ian has a secret life in the shadows... and it's starting to catch up to him.
Scene Description
Ian and Leslie are coworkers in a news organization. With a tight deadline looming, Ian has been MIA, until Leslie barges into the office men's room to discover him bruised up and disheveled, attempting to clean up a bloody nose.
Written by Ashlyn Edwards
Susan Willis
ActressI have enjoyed your work in your tapes. On this one, If I were calling you back. I'd ask to not keep the tissues in your nose throughout the scene - it's distracting. And maybe a tighter frame. Also, the opening with the "fake water" splash on your face - not necessary. Would have liked to see you acknowledge Leslie when she walks in. I don't think you established where she was until towards the end. Speaking of 'Leslie". the reader (was it a male doing a female voice?) it was a bit distracting and since the volume was same as yours... it kinda took away from your serious tone.
