Angela Katherine Baker as Abby
Character Description
Abby, a single, 30-something copywriter, is a persistent optimist but her positive attitude is waning after a morning of bad luck threatens to ruin her birthday and her prospects for love.
Scene Description
After a terrible morning full of bad luck, Abby finds an excuse to make her way, yet again, to her office's front desk reception area. She's hoping to have a run-in with the cute UPS delivery guy she has a crush on and have some good luck for a change. It's her birthday, after all.
Written by Amanda Pfeiffer
Mark Miertschin
ActorGood job! I liked the prop package at the end. You did have some reflection in your glasses that was a bit distracting. I missed the"woohoo" line. I believe the fake excitement "woohoo" line is important. Has to be fake and not seem like it's fake to the other characters.
Tim Randle
ActorThought you had some strong moments. Nice button. Framing, lighting, and sound was great. One suggestion to consider would be to ask your reader to lower their volume. Great work!
Clint Hankinson
ActorLoved it Angela! Technical stuff was perfect. Loved the use of space especially at the end with the papers. I could see what you were thinking and feeling throughout. I could see this cut and pasted into show or film . Awesome job as usual!
