Joel White as Wilbur
Character Description
Ornery. Bitter. Got an axe to grind. All in a comedic way.
Scene Description
After sitting through an entire funeral service full of eulogies that he knows are all phoney, Wilbur, an ornery man on the best of days, calls them all out.
Written by Jaclyn Whitt
Mark Miertschin
ActorGood job! As I was told, we need to slow down a bit and enjoy the pauses.
Wendy Cyr
ActressJoel,
Good job. You had good timing and delivery. Your eye contact with the people you were talking to was well done. The only improvement was a techinical one which is that it sounded like the room was hollow or had some echo. Otherwise you did a good job.
Wendy
Halimah Iman
ActressOmggggg!!! 😂 I've never laughed so hard, from word one! Brilliant 👏🏽 I've seen 3 other folks do this scene but yours is a stand out, by a lot! Way to just go full on with hilarious energy!! 5 Stars 🌟
Rachael Brown
ActressJoel, I liked seeing you stand up to start the scene.
My suggestion would be to have a colored background and good light so we can see your eyes and facial expressions better.
Good look and a strong voice. Keep going.