Jonathan Hoch as Charles Riley Doogan
Character Description
Charlie Doogan is a deeply unhinged individual with a warped sense of reality. His erratic behavior and delusional rants reveals a mind consumed by paranoia, violence, and a twisted vision of the world. He is inspired by Charles Manson.
Scene Description
A deranged serial killer ramblingly reveals the chaos of their fragmented, disturbed psyche, that blurs reality and delusion.
Written by Jason Walter Vaile
Dale Norman Green
Actor | WriterNice work. It'd be tempting to overact and take the easy route by being ' crazy ', but your performance was subtle and genuine. Good luck on your road to an acting career !
Deborah Roby
ActressKeep playing with that pacing, you did a good job speeding up and slowing down.
A few thoughts, it looked like you looked down to check your lines. If you can find a cookbook holder and set the side up in your sight line, you can have your lines right there with nobody the wiser!
I would also play with volume changes if you're playing a crazy person.
But good work.
Clint Hankinson
ActorAwesome job Jonathan! Loved the pacing and calm "crazy!" Technical stuff was great.
A couple thoughts: Would love to see even more of a revelation on your face when you think you might be Jesus. How would that make you feel? When you think you might be a hobo, let us see you picturing that image of you in a box car with wine and a straight razor.
Just my 2 cents! Nice work!
